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Notes on "Please Please Me"


Notes on ... Series #22.0 (PPM.0)
  by Alan W. Pollack
       Key: E Major
     Meter: 4/4
        CD: "Please Please Me", Track 7 (Parlophone CDP7 46435-2)
  Recorded: 11th September; 26th November 1962, Abbey Road 2
UK-release: 11th January  1963 (A Single / "Ask Me Why")
US-release: 25th February 1963 (A Single / "Ask Me Why")
  Next note "Please Please Me" is only their second single, but it already represents a quantum leap in compositional terms for the Beatles over their first one, "Love Me Do". In addition to the tight vocal harmonies seen earlier, we have here a couple of tricky chord choices, crackling drum fills, continuous variation in the deployment of the backing vocals, and as they say in the 'biz', much, much more.
  Next note Compared with the extant tapes of the Quarrymen, the Star Club, the Decca audition, or even the couple of preceding EMI sessions, "Please Please Me" gives us an energized performance and an arrangement more complicated than anything these Boys had attempted heretofore. This would seem to suggest that the firm and creative influence of George Martin began to be felt even at this early date.
  Next note This song is also emotionally quite gripping, not only because of its apparently incessant drive, but even more so for the very human way in which the hero appears to waver in the amount of self-control he can muster — starting out urgingly insistent yet trying to appear controlled; talking through clenched teeth in a forced-polite voice, even while his facade is continually cracking to reveal the true heat and impatience behind it. On one level, it's a fairly obvious seduction scenario, yet you find yourself quite hypnotized if not overwhelmed by the force and subtlety with which the meaning of the words are played-off against the message of the music.

Stating Point of View

  Next note The lyrics of "Please Please Me", when compared with the other contemporaneous songs of Lennon and McCartney, seem rather unique in terms of point of view and expositional context. The canonical bundle of their original songs which were officially released up through the end of 1963 (i.e. the twenty-one single and album cuts running from "Love Me Do" through "Not A Second Time" makes for an interesting study from this perspective; a thorough job is way out of scope with this current article but even the bare statistics are revealing:
  • All twenty-one songs are about the romantic relationship between a boy and a girl from the perspective of the boy; granted, so far no surprise.
  • Seventeen of the songs are written in direct address to the girl, and these range from the vulnerable pleading of "Love Me Do" to the mushy puppy love of "Do You Want To Know A Secret", to the glib giddiness of "I Wanna Be Your Man". The harsher confrontations which would suddenly become a staple trademark starting on the "A Hard Day's Night" album with such classics as "Tell Me Why" and "You Can't Do That" are represented in this sampling only by the relatively milder "Not A Second Time".
  • Only two of the songs are soliloquies in which the girl is spoken of in the third person; you have the encomium of "I Saw Her Standing There" versus the angst-ridden confessional of "Misery".
  • Two of the songs stick out as unique; "She Loves You", which features core-talk advice from the singer to his friend regarding the friend's girl, and our current choice, "Please Please Me".
  Next note In "Please Please Me", we have what is in essence a direct address, but one that is framed as kiss-and-tell reportage of something that happened The Night Before; as though most of the lyrics should be written in quotes. Of course, it's a small, even moot, distinction because your ultimate experience of the song is on the level of overhearing the boy urging the girl directly and in real time; like a so-called frame-tale short story in which by the second page you've totally forgotten that there ever was any frame established at the beginning because the action itself is so absorbing.


  Next note "Please Please Me" has a compact form of which is likely motivated by the length of the verses and the general raving intensity of mood which would begin to chafe if unduly prolonged. Note the solitary bridge section and the absence of an instrumental solo break:
   Intro | Verse | Verse | Bridge | Verse | Outro
  Next note The use of a complete ending is worthy of note. In context of the rest of the Top 40 of this period, circa 1963, where, failing recourse to a statistical analysis of the matter, we seem to at least remember everything as having a fade-out at the end, the relatively large number of early Lennon and McCartney songs with complete endings (twelve out of those same canonical twenty-one singled out above) would seem to be bucking a trend; then again, perhaps "setting a trend" would be more correct under the circumstances; after all, for a while, it was their profession.

Harmony and Modality

  Next note Compared to the tangy modality of "Love Me Do", the melodic material here is purely diatonic E Major. The harmony, in contrast, while still heavily reliant on I, IV and V, presents us with some unusual surprises in the form of the G and C chords which add just a hint of bluesy minor-mode inflection.


  Next note The introductory phrase of only four measures played over the unchanging E Major (I) chord is deceptively simple. Here, as we've seen in so many other songs, the intro, for all its brevity, plays a key expository role.
  First off, we have the ever popular hook phrase trumpeted out by the harmonica and guitar in unison. In many songs, such hook phrases foreshadow material that will appear in either the melody of the coming verses or as a mockingbird-like obbligato figure in the background. In "Please Please Me" the hook is used both ways.
  Secondly, we have the unusual pick-up start on the fourth beat. What you'll look back on later as the unrelenting forward drive of this song is thus to be found here right at the very start in the iambic "da-dum" gesture of those first two notes; even that little drum fill which bridges the gap between the end of the intro and the beginning of the verse reinforces this gesture.
  Lastly, take note for now of that pleasant dotted quarter note snap in the second measure of our hook phrase; the better to appreciate how this phrase is modified for its appearance in the melody of the verse.

First Verse - "Last night I said these words to my girl"

  Next note The verse is sixteen measures long and is built out of four phrases of even length:
      |E           |-           |A     E     |EG GA AB BB |
   E:  I                         IV    I       III IV V

      |E           |-           |A     E     |-           |
       I                         IV    I

      |A           |f#          |c#          |A           |
       IV           ii           vi           IV

      |E           |A     B     |E           |A     B     |
       I            IV    V      I            IV    V

   [Figure 22.1]
  As you work your way through the four phrases in turn, you quickly discover a clever overall dramatic shape to the verse. The first two phrases hang together like a couplet, and the remaining two phrases seem to meld into a refrain-like eight-measure unit.
  Next note The first two phrases are obviously related to each other, though there is a subtlety in the transition between the two of them which is the first clue to our hero's wavering self-control. The last measure of the first phrase, on the one hand, seems to suggest a sudden extra push forward with its syncopated, momentary speed-up of the harmonic rhythm; note the three Major chords moving step-wise in a row and changing on the off-beat, the first of which — G-Major — isn't even a legitimate member of the key we're in, adding a bluesy cross relation to the texture — G-natural against a background of G-sharps. For an instant, we seem to be hurtling just a tad out of control. And yet, with the start of the second phrase, we're right back where we started out before. Order has been restored; as though our hero, carried away by his own sweet excitement quickly catches himself and backs off, the better to resume his former polite and measured, albeit insistent, tack.
  Although the second phrase is virtually identical to the first, the difference between them in their final measures is of structural significance. The open ending of the first one on V smoothly motivates the start of the second one. By contrast, the closed harmonic ending of the second phrase on the I chord includes that unusual guitar riff in measure 8, the combination of which sets off this opening couplet from what follows.
  Next note The third phrase is one of both musical excursi and build toward a climax by virtue of the introduction of new chords, the progression away from the I yet not necessarily reaching a clear resting point, and of course, the employment in every measure of the hard syncopation on the half-beat between "two" and "three"; this last perturbation being ironic to the extent that this very phrase is the only one in the entire song in which the harmonic rhythm holds steady for as long as four measures. The climax, per se, is to be found in the reaching of the melodic apex (high A) of the entire verse in measure 12.
  Next note You would surmise at this point that our hero has crossed the start-line and opened his attack for better or worse, but immediately following, we experience yet another retreat of sorts in the way the fourth phrase resolves the accumulated tension of the preceding one with its return to a musical texture and vocabulary that is very close to that of the first two phrases: no more syncopations, a resumption of plain I -» IV -» V, and an exchange of the "come on's" for the "please please's"; all this, reinforced by the return of the hook phrase at the very end. Incidentally, note how the placement of the hook above the I -» IV -» V progression in this context gives it a different feel from the one it has when it is accompanied by just the I chord as in the intro or the first half of the verse.

Details, Duckie

  Next note All this agitation and the thrashing between polite insistence and a less patient coaxing is only further enhanced by the manifest details of the verse's arrangement.
  • The adaptation of the opening hook phrase as it appears in the melody of the first two phrases conveys determined insistence on at least two levels. First off, in the second measure, the snapped rhythm heard in the intro is here replaced by a continuation of the "marcato", almost hammer-like quarter notes of the first measure. Enhancing this is the way that Paul sustains the single tone of E above John's singing of the actual melody. Quite nicely, the snapped rhythm isn't entirely dispensed with here, but is rather moved all the way to the extended ending of the hook phrase in measure 3, where it too adds to the mood of insistence.
  • The forward-propelling syncopations of the third phrase are put into bold italics by the antiphonal deployment of the backing voices of Paul and George; soon to become yet another Beatles' signature device. Unusual here is the way in which the fragments sung by the lead and the backers fit seamlessly together in one melodic line; an effect of great antiquity in classical music, the technical term for which is "hocket".
  • Gentler though undeniable pushes forward are to be found as well in the drum fills which bridge measures 4 and 5, 7 and 8, and the springing guitar riff of measure 8 itself.
  • And on the side of vacillation, the harmonic rhythm over the course of these sixteen measures is more varied, changeable, and uneven than virtually any other example we've looked at in this series thus far.

Second Verse - "You don't need me to show the way love"

  Next note Aside from some new lyrics, the entire verse is repeated virtually verbatim with one minor change made at the end to smoothly effect the transition into the bridge. In the last measure here, the harmony holds still on I, the hook phrase is truncated by half, and for a single instant (the only one of its kind in the entire song), all voices and guitars are tacit in favor of a series of solo drum fills. It's a subtle gesture which binds off what has preceded and, at the same time, leads ahead to what follows.

Bridge - "I don't want to start complaining"

  Next note Even though this bridge is built out of the same old three basic chords, the lyrics of the song take a decided turn at this point for the openly confrontational in this section, and the music, too, provides plenty of contrast with what has preceded.
  First off, there is the unusual ten-measure length which is broken up into two phrases of uneven length:
      |A    |B      |E      |-      |
   E:  IV    V       I

      |A    |B      |E      |A   B  |E      |A   B  |
       IV    V       I       IV  V   I       IV  V

   [Figure 22.2]
  Note how both phrases start out away from the tonic and quickly close in on it. The first phrase here is distinguished by its novel use of the backing voices; at first, just harmonized "ahhh's" behind John's solo, followed by the surprising "in my heart" rejoinder of measure 4.
  The second phrase is even more interesting. Paradoxically, though its length is stretched out, the harmonic rhythm is conversely quickened in its second half, and this serves to draw us back into the final verse with the same music that was used earlier to lead the first verse into the second one, fanfare-like hook phrase and all.
  What is perhaps the most climactic moment of the entire song takes place in the third measure of this second bridge phrase; where the melody suddenly jumps an octave to high B (no coincidence, the single highest melodic peak in the song) on the phrase "to reason with you." Ironically, the chords to the beginning of both bridge phrases are identical, yet, the E chord, which in the first phrase provides a focal point of repose, here in the second phrase, by virtue of the melodic high-point, serves as a jumping off point for the rest of the phrase with its open ending on V; context is all.
  The musical climax of this section is in direct synchrony with that of the lyrics, yet, with the transition right into the final verse, we back off yet again from what otherwise might have seemed a point of no return.

Last Verse and Outro

  Next note The final verse is a full reprise of the first one, and the familiar device of ending with a triple repeat of the last sub-phrase is neatly worked in here as a natural outgrowth of the fourth phrase of the verse.
  Although none of the thematic material in this outro is anything new by this point of the song, the boys do bring out a couple of surprises they've clearly been saving till the end. The first one is the pseudo-contrapuntal texture in which the "please please me" and hook phrases seem to swirl and cascade around us. But most attention grabbing of all is choice of chords for the final phrase, each one of which is sharply punctuated by a fill of four even sixteenth notes on the snare drum:
      |E     G      |C      B       |E      |
   E:  I     V of VI VI     V        I
             from parallel

   [Figure 22.3]
  The use of the G and C chords is not nearly so far out as might seem at first sight; especially if you think of them in context of being borrowed, as it were, from the parallel minor key; besides, we were even sort of "warned" to half-expect something like this given the early appearance of the G chord by itself in the verse; kind of like how the murder weapon in a mystery appears as a casual prop in the first scene. Still, the bluesy hint of the minor mode plus the implicit cross-relations of the G- and C-naturals against predominant sharps of the E Major key makes an extremely bracing effect. For laughs, try this last phrase with the more "correct" diatonic chords of G#-Major and c#-minor and see how hopelessly square it sounds by contrast.
  Next note In the final result, this song is a worthy textbook example of where a fade-out ending would be, not just wishy-washy, but suggestive of a different unraveling of our hero's outing; one filled with intimations of endless begging. Instead, the audacious ending we are given provides the quite appropriate denouement for the passionate plot of the song up to this point. It is as though our hero, careful not to shoot his whole wad too soon lest all else fails, has held back something, (not without some difficulty, I dare say), with which to bring things ultimately to a head with an abrupt, pro-active bang, so to speak; hence, the full ending from which, this time, there can be no retreat.
  Alan (110790#22)


  Next note Just a recording-related footnote to the "Please Please Me" article:
  Next note It has often been noted how in several instances, once George Harrison had worked out a satisfactory guitar solo for a song, he would keep playing it consistently and unvaryingly to an
uncreative fault; somewhat analogous to what we hear about Macca'son-stage banter between numbers. One thing that surprised me in checking a number of alternate versions of "Please Please Me" was the discovery that in this instance, poor George seems to have learned an outright mistake to absolute perfection.
  Next note The location of this mistake is in the appearance of the hook phrase by the guitar and harmonica which precedes the final verse (right at the end of the bridge). I first noticed the mistake on a version played at the BEEB. As background here, you must remember that without sophisticated recording equipment with which to to overdubbing, on a song like "Please Please Me", the Boys dispensed entirely with the harmonica part. At any rate, the proper notes for the hook are as follows:
   E     D#    C#    B     C#    B     G#    E

   [Figure 22.4]
  Next note George all by himself without the harmonica to hide behind plays:
   E     D#    B     C#    C#    B     B     G#

   [Figure 22.5]
  Next note At first I figured that it was just an incidental accident. By less than an hour later, I discovered that the mistake occurs identically on three BEEB versions. But wait, that's not all. This afternoon, I had the great fortune of playing a cassette on my Walkperson at work containing the infamous error-laden version of "Please Please Me" which appeared one time only on the original "Please Please Me" stereo LP; infamous, that is, for John's flubbed words and raspy voice. Well, guess what, the same guitar mistake is there too, and in unison with the harmonica, it makes for a rather indelicately dissonant mess on the third and fourth notes.
  Next note For the record, so zu sagen, the mono "Please Please Me" album version which is now commonly available on CD (and is the one from which I worked from for my article) actually seems to be the only place where the guitar phrase isn't played wrong.
  "Very strange."
  Alan (110790#22.0)
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